Crisis and Climax
Jun. 7th, 2005 01:15 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
skyringMore Squirty Bertie news. I've been thinking hard about the plot and I've found a crisis point leading to a climax that ties in with the rest of the story. It ties in very well, actually, once you see the second chapter - which I haven't completed yet. Builds up the tension nicely. Those of you who know how the story ends, you might be surprised!
I can see I'm going to have to do a fair bit of research on comatose and brain dead patients to get this to hang together, otherwise the second half is going to be fairly soggy. And I think I can re-use a certain character from Manly Books. I've just discovered his sister, sitting slumped in a chair.
I can see I'm going to have to do a fair bit of research on comatose and brain dead patients to get this to hang together, otherwise the second half is going to be fairly soggy. And I think I can re-use a certain character from Manly Books. I've just discovered his sister, sitting slumped in a chair.
