skyring

A new chapter up - out of sequence, as it's numbered 13 and the previous chapter was 14.

http://www.skyring.com.au/Skyring/Monash_Drive/Entries/2009/10/1_13._Unslung_hero.html

I keep a printed copy for my wife to read the latest chapters. In a Levenger Circa journal, so i can extract chapters when i revise them and whack in the new versions. Revisions are typically minor, with typos and spelling errors corrected, sometimes a change in phrasing, inconsistencies ironed out.

Overall, i'm happy with the fifteen thousand words so far. Several threads are coming together nicely, there was a lovely bit of serendipity regarding magpies and I'm beginning to find that I can't fit everything I want to put into a chapter into the chapter, meaning it has to go in later. All good.

Kerri has been helpful with comments.

The website indicates that comments may be submitted, and I've added a test comment on one chapter, but so far i'm not getting any feedback, which is a shame.

I spent $229 yesterday on Snow Leopard, a new version of iLife, and a copy of iWork, just in case it was my old software holding me back. There may be some disruption as I update my software.